Mint Cosmic > Cosmic Mint

[Mint Cosmic]

Name: Mint Cosmic/// Cosmic Mint

Title: Nah, None

Rank: Peasant?

Gender: Female

Race: Half Pixie Half Human

Age: Nineteen

Class: Mage - Healer - Potion Maker

Appearance:

Mint Has chocolate brown hair that goes a little past her shoulders. Her Brown hair is extremely thick and her normal hair style is keeping it up into two little pig tails while letting most of it let lose and wild. Though sometimes you can find all of her hair up into pig tails. Though thats when she is in a REAL bad mood and it's probably Cosmi instead. Mint's body is small and cute, a little smaller then an average humans, she looks about fifteen or fourteen, though Cosmic always finds a way to get her body to look scary and threatening.

Mint's eyes sometimes change colors with the days. Most of the time they are a light brown. Though there are some rare moments where they are a bright Sapphire blue and at times a beautiful emerald green.

Weapons/Items: A mage staff

Novo Animus:Unknown ((Thats what I'm supposed to put right?))

Talents: Mint - Cooking, and Cleaning;

Mint has a natural born talent for cooking and cleaning, and other things related to daily life. She doesn't think she is very good at it, but honestly she is. She has done so many odd jobs that she is very good at things that everyday people need.

Cosmi - Advise;

Though Cosmi is always a bit rash, she actually is very good at strategies and helping people with good advise, obviously normally Mint is the only who ever gets the advise, but she will help you if she likes you meaning, you must be strong like her, but weaker then her.


Personality:

Mint has a split personality, she goes by two names. Mint, being her normal shy self and Cosmi Being her... other side.

Mint: Mint is a really depressed girl. She hides in her self, and she NEVER talks. She normally keeps a journal around and writes the things she says down. No she is not mute, just scared of talking, scared of saying something that makes her screw up. If Mint ever talks it's with someone she really trusts and likes. She dose love helping people despite how shy she is Mint is showing her mostly Pixie side cute and small. Cosmi takes over Mint when she is stuck in a problem, she lets her come out, or if Mint is really tired.

Cosmi: Cosmi is the exact opposite of cute little Mint. Cosmi has one of the wost attitude around. She glares and yells at anyone who ticks her off even a little. She hates the world and everyone in it, and will beat up a five-year old. Though the reason she acts like this ((And only Mint knows)) Is because she's scared of being called weak. And scared of being controlled, like Mint always is. She hates Mint for that factor. Also, if you piss her off to much, she will beat you senseless. Though if Cosmi ever gets exhausted Mint is forced to come back.

History:

Mint didn't always have a split personality, in fact it was kind of recent when Cosmi showed up. Mint was born by a dumb mistake, by her human Pixie mother and her human father, her father having her way with her mother. Taking control of her. After Mint was born she was abandoned at a door step of someone her mother didn't know, or care about. A daughter of a man like that wasn't worth her mothers time.

Mint was picked up by a not-so-caring mother. She never really paid attention to Mint, but wanted to look good by saying "Hey look! Aren't I good person I took this baby!" So Mint never really got the attention she needed. She tough herself everything she knows about healing and magic, medicen making and such. When she showed her.. loving, mother her mother just kicked her out for being such a freak and being able to do magic.

Mint ever since has lived in the streets, doing odd jobs for food, being taught and learning new things. She is a very wick learner, which helped her on her way. In the end Mint always ended up helping as many people as she could. Though she tried her hardest, there was always someone better, someone stronger, wiser. Mint never felt like she could do enough, and that she was just being controlled, also bringing down her trust in people, and herself.

Mint eventually got so tired of it, she worked her hardest to become better, but it ended up that she only could be a new person when she was under pressure. Her inner, self. Cosmi is what she named her and when she is out, Mint doesn't have much control, Mint is even controlled by herself.

Cosmi first came out when Mint was working as a temporary cleaning made for someones house. The children people who hired her kicked her and pushed her on the ground and abused her to no end. Mint finally got so tired of it, she all the sudden heard a small whisper let me out... lose control... She closed her eyes and slowly she became someone new. When she became Cosmi she kicked they children and smiled evilly, but the parents came home at that moment and Mint came back. Weak, tired. The parents fired her on the spot. She wouldn't' get any jobs around children anytime soon.

Ever since though Mint hasn't needed too she actually got a job as a waitress at an adult bar, some say she is to young, but they really don't know her true age, and she says she is twenty one, after all she is a pixie she is supposed to look sweet and little. She explains this every time she is asked. Oh, and how dose she know she is a pixie? Thats another story for another time.

[Kishimoto Kyo]

First thing I noticed is that you'll need to put more description into her appearance. So far it's good, but what about her height? You said she's smaller than an average human, but what's an average human? XP (Are we even average? XD lmao) Besides height, please also mention weight, skin color (just for clarity purposes when looking at different pictures), body type, and anything else different about her, such as tattoos or piercings, etc. Please also give detail as to what clothing she normally wears, depending on the day, the season, or anything else that would be related to something she wears, that's including necklaces, earrings, bracelets, etc.

For under weapons and items, you just mention "a mage staff". Please give a complete description of what exactly her mage staff is, like is it made of wood, cooper, a metal pole with an orb at the end, or maybe it's twisting and odd looking. Please also place clearly in the description what the mage staff can do, what your character can do with it, and anything else otherwise needing mentioned.

To help with Mint's talents, you mentioned she's very good at cooking, but what exactly does she tend to cook? Meats, vegetables, dairy products, etc.? Does she tend to cook more to the tastes of the person eating it or toward a particular effect depending on the food, be it sweet, tangy, spicy? You also mentioned that one of her talents is cleaning, but you didn't write anything about it. Does she just do house cleaning, mopping, dishes, etc.?

For clarity purposes, how exactly does Cosmi know how to form good strategies? She just knew, or did she learn from an experience?

Personality wise, everything looks good, but could you expand them a little more? Food they like, hobbies, etc.

The history is well done, short and sweet, but it's almost too short, at least to me at some moments. If you could, could you expand a little in various places? Such as who her mother was exactly, what she did, and who her father was, maybe why he took advantage of her mother. The mother who adopted Mint seems kinda static in how she's shown, and I'm wondering what exactly she did for a living. Did she have a husband? Any other children? Did she work, etc.? And why exactly does she seem to hate magic, if Mint even knows at all. When Mint is out on the streets, could you go into more depth as to what these jobs were? Were they mostly cleaning, or cooking, or both? Or were there other jobs at random that had no relation to each other? Near the end of the history, you mention she's hired there, but why decide to work there? Just another odd job or some other reason?

After looking through your history, you mention she's a peasant, and called a Mage. From the looks of it, she is a peasant, but you can change it to something else, but you don't mention in the history how she becomes a Mage, being a Healer or a Potion Maker. When you explain this, I can take a better look at how this is all connected with each other. Oh, and yeah, for now, your Novo Animus is unknown, and no one knows what their's are. Just as a last note, there are several spelling and grammer errors, so just look through it and correct them while you're writing. If there is something there for a purpose though, please tell me so I don't think it's an error =)

I am sorry that this is such a long list, but I'm very happy that you're wanting to RP here =) I hope that what I'm asking of you doesn't seem too much to you. You have plenty of time to do everything, so no rush ^-^

[Kishimoto Kyo]

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